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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 09:25, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 08:54, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 08:54, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
Comments
- EARWIG shows 13.0% - violations unlikely.
- According to link-dispenser,
- 2 refs need archive links.
- References are looking perfect!
- Isn't there any kind of promotional poster available...?
- I would suggest including all 4 episode-posters in the infobox using
{{Multiple image | border = infobox}}template.- Only part 4 had a poster, its been added.
- I would suggest including all 4 episode-posters in the infobox using
Vestrian24Bio 09:19, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
- Done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 10:39, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
- Add featured music (
|music=) and runtime (|length=) to the infobox.
Done - Add alt text to the infobox image.
Done - In the guest appearances part, mention which part they appeared in.
Not done
- The list is too long to comfortably do that, some appeared in multiple and some doubled up on characters.
- The page is in categories Pages using infobox television episode with incorrectly formatted values and Pages using infobox television episode with unnecessary list markup - Some parameters (
|director=,|writer=,|story=,|teleplay=,|narrator=,|presenter=,|music=,|photographer=,|editor=,|production=,|release_date=, and|airdate=) have a pre-defined plainlist formatting, they don't need the template {{Plainlist}} again - fix it.
Done - In the first sentence
American superhero television series
Done - Include that this is the ninth graphic novel in the series.
- Split the first sentence after
... series The Flash.
.
Done - Add the overall episode count in the series to the remaining sentence
Done - Move
The series centers on Barry Allen / The Flash, a crime-scene investigator who gains superhuman speed which he uses to fight criminals, including others who also have superhuman abilities.
to the end of the first paragraph and maybe add a premise of the finale.
Done - Add summaries of development, filming, viewership and reception to the lead section.
Done - What are the titles (Reunions, The Blues, Changes and Finale) in the plot section...?
- The subtitle for the episode
Vestrian24Bio 07:36, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Vestrian24Bio: done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 19:37, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
- No need for a full stop in the infobox image caption as its not a proper sentence.
Done - In part 4, link to Cobalt Blue (Arrowverse) instead.
- Removed link as Eddie is already linked and Cobalt Blue (Arrowverse) takes you to the same section
- In the "Development and filming" section, link Negative, Part Two.
Done - Along with
six days before wrapping
andshutting down one day before
, can't the relevant dates be added to it.- Gustin didn't reveal the dates only the timeframes
- Link to Speed Force (Arrowverse) and Negative Speed Force in the "Devising endings" section.
Done - Change all links of Speed Force to Speed Force (Arrowverse). (infobox & part two)
Done - In the "Character returns and callbacks to past seasons" section,
In addition, the primary antagonists of seasons ...
.
Done - In the "Casting" section,
- Can't there be more images (at least the returning antagonists - a and Karan Oberoi (if available)).
Done - No need for a ref on the image caption. Also, it should have a specific alt text.
Done - Grant Gustin should be linked as its a distinct sub-section. Same for Oliver Queen / Green Arrow / The Spectre also.
- Link to Caitlin Snow (Arrowverse) instead.
Done - Link Eddie Thawne / Cobalt Blue as whole.
Done - Create a link to Henry Allen (Arrowverse).
Done - In the 3rd paragraph
Karan Oberoi.
- there's a full stop instead of a comma.
Done
- Can't there be more images (at least the returning antagonists - a and Karan Oberoi (if available)).
- Throughout the article both Hunter Zolomon (Arrowverse) and Zoom (Arrowverse) are used, only use any one of them at all occasions to be consistent.
Done - In the lead instead of 430 thousand viewers, just say 430,000 viewers.
Done - Add author's first and last names to ref 42.
Done Writing for Den of Geek
- who wrote... (mention Lacy Baugher)
Done- Format the last part as following,
Done
== References ==
=== Notes ===
{{notelist}}
=== Citations ===
{{reflist}}
== External links ==
- The page is still on the Category:Pages using infobox television episode with incorrectly formatted values - fix that.
Done
@OlifanofmrTennant: That's all. Vestrian24Bio 13:09, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Vestrian24Bio: done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 05:23, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- What's the reason for moving Cosnett's image, it seems irrelevant to the section. Vestrian24Bio 06:48, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Vestrian24Bio: Moved back Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 07:31, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- What's the reason for moving Cosnett's image, it seems irrelevant to the section. Vestrian24Bio 06:48, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
- Source spot-check: pass

All else good, passing for GA. Vestrian24Bio 07:49, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
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