Semi-protected edit request on 19 December 2024
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Is the adverb "wildly" justified in its use to depict how something is described. At the end of the first paragraph summarize the content on this Wikipedia page. I sense that it would be more concise to simply get rid of it from the paragraph. 2604:3D09:6A7A:CB20:B518:DA7C:CBF8:566 (talk) 01:12, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 24 December 2024
Remove line stating he is currently on death row. It has no citation and in the previous line states he is serving life without parole. 2600:1702:2370:2E10:AE8E:BBE7:9D8:7FBE (talk) 08:13, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Early Life, paragraph 5 grammar error
Switches topic mid paragraph from pov of maternal uncle to step-mother without clearly marking. Pronouns then refer incorrectly. Perhaps either a topic sentence in the paragraph to clear up the subject of the paragraph and/or adding a reference to the relationship of Mann to Dylnn. 2601:647:CA00:1A6D:71FC:9557:21B4:94EE (talk) 02:54, 3 February 2025 (UTC)
- Tweaked. BlueRockThrush (talk) 00:50, 26 March 2026 (UTC)
Possible grammar issue?
I'm not a native speaker, so I'd rather have someone else confirm this. Is this sentence "Roof reportedly the defense team also argued that Roof masked his mental illness during the trial. [165]" grammatically correct? TobbiM (talk) 08:32, 25 January 2026 (UTC)
- @TobbiM: Yea, that makes no sense at all. I looked at the source ref and fixed it. BlueRockThrush (talk) 00:48, 26 March 2026 (UTC)