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Nominator: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 07:34, 7 April 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Edward056686 (talk · contribs) 23:03, 29 June 2026 (UTC)
I will review this. Edward056686 (talk) 23:03, 29 June 2026 (UTC)
- I think that the section titled "Life and career" should just be "Career" since it only discusses acting.
- Gemma was killed off later that year and her death created storylines for Dom, Belle and her family; Samantha Teasdale from Leeds Live opined that Gemma's exit was one of the soap's most memorable deaths.[7][8][9] It's best to put citations directly at the end of the text they support. It seems that the two sources unrelated to Teasdale should be moved further back to the semicolon, and maybe the sentence should become two sentences.
- Later that year, she also played Amanza in the pantomime Cinderella, set in Ancient Egypt, which ran at the Theatre Royal Stratford East's production from 19 November 2022 to 7 January 2023; the production was also streamed and available online to local hospices, hospitals and care homes. Can this be edited to avoid using the word "also" twice in one sentence? Also, if possible mention where the production was streamed.
Overall, the article is short but well written and seems to cover the significant aspects of the topic. My only question is if any personal life information about Tendai can be added. Otherwise, it looks good and I will do a source spot check next. Edward056686 (talk) 21:51, 2 July 2026 (UTC)