Your submission at Articles for creation: Jocelyn Tsao (April 14)
This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
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Hello, Kaziw!
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- Thank you @Suitskvarts for the comment. May have used some peacock terms since English is not my primary language. I have edited the tone and included more references. Please see if the edit looks good. Kaziw (talk) 05:23, 15 April 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Jocelyn Tsao (April 20)
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
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- Hi @Bonadea, thanks for your feedback. I have added more media coverages instead the subjects' company websites. Hope that addresses the issue regarding the reference.
- As for the issue regarding the tone, I have removed transitional paragraphs which may have been the reasons, but I'd appreciate it if you could also point me to the sections you were referring to or how I can improve the draft before my next submission. Thanks! Kaziw (talk) 03:13, 27 April 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Jocelyn Tsao (June 1)
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:09, 1 November 2025 (UTC)
Your draft article, Draft:Jocelyn Tsao
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Almad Group (December 27)
Your draft shows signs of having been generated by a large language model, such as ChatGPT. Wikipedia guidelines prohibit the use of LLMs to write articles from scratch. In addition, LLM-generated articles usually have multiple quality issues, to include:
- Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
- Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
- Essay-like writing
- Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
- Close paraphrasing
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Full of LLM "curated" buzz words and highly promotional in content.
See WP:NCORP and WP:SIRS for the notability requirements here, but this is an encyclopedia, not an advertising platform.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Almad Group (January 11)
Your draft shows signs of having been generated by a large language model, such as ChatGPT. Wikipedia guidelines prohibit the use of LLMs to write articles from scratch. In addition, LLM-generated articles usually have multiple quality issues, to include:
The comment the reviewer left was:
- Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
- Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
- Essay-like writing
- Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
- Close paraphrasing
Still some AI indicators, as well as a tone that reads like an advertisement in places.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Almad Group (February 20)
Your draft shows signs of having been generated by a large language model, such as ChatGPT. Wikipedia guidelines prohibit the use of LLMs to write articles from scratch. In addition, LLM-generated articles usually have multiple quality issues, to include:
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit it after they have been resolved.
- Promotional tone, editorializing and other words to watch
- Vague, generic, and speculative statements extrapolated from similar subjects
- Essay-like writing
- Hallucinations (plausible-sounding, but false information) and non-existent references
- Close paraphrasing
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Almad Group (May 27)
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The subject is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia.
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